Week one: post write: fiction essay The thesis for my fiction essay is that Mrs. Mallard evolves into a stronger and more independent person based on her actions after knowing her husband’s death. I think it is clear, concise and defensible because it subtly shows the result of that Mrs. Mallard through the death of her husband grief turns into relief and freedom.I have written Mrs. Mallard’s changing reactions on the process of dealing with her emotions about Mr. Mallard’s death and how she transgresses through different feelings about the matter. My body part further develops my thesis and explains every thesis point that is the analysis of each character. I think the audience can find and evaluate my sources because I strictly used MLA style in writing my citations. I will revise my deception on a specific work before submitting.I formatted my essay well by meeting the requirements of MLA style. But I will also double check it again.I don’t think my easy is entirely free of all the grammatical errors. It may exist some diction and punctuation mistakes. I am working on fixing it.The strength of my essay is that I sufficiently analyzed inner and outer voice of each character, for example in all the change we see in Mrs. Mallard who has a weak heart, it is evident that she evolves into a stronger woman before her untimely death. The weaknesses of my essay are grammar mistakes that I have to check a lot of times before I submit my final draft.What I need to mainly focus on is the diction and grammar of my essay. Maybe the way Iexpress a specific idea isn’t concise or accurate enough so I need take special care to revise it before I turn in my
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