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Week one post write fiction essay The thesis for my fiction essay is that Mrs Mallard evolves into a stronger and more independent person based on her actions after knowing her husband s death I think it is clear concise and defensible because it subtly shows the result of that Mrs Mallard through the death of her husband grief turns into relief and freedom I have written Mrs Mallard s changing reactions on the process of dealing with her emotions about Mr Mallard s death and how she transgresses through different feelings about the matter My body part further develops my thesis and explains every thesis point that is the analysis of each character I think the audience can find and evaluate my sources because I strictly used MLA style in writing my citations I will revise my deception on a specific work before submitting I formatted my essay well by meeting the requirements of MLA style But I will also double check it again I don t think my easy is entirely free of all the grammatical errors It may exist some diction and punctuation mistakes I am working on fixing it The strength of my essay is that I sufficiently analyzed inner and outer voice of each character for example in all the change we see in Mrs Mallard who has a weak heart it is evident that she evolves into a stronger woman before her untimely death The weaknesses of my essay are grammar mistakes that I have to check a lot of times before I submit my final draft What I need to mainly focus on is the diction and grammar of my essay Maybe the way I express a specific idea isn t concise or accurate enough so I need take special care to revise it before I turn in my essay