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Essay 1: OutlineBoylesSpring 2012English 60Name: _______________________________________________ Date ____________Essay 1: Outline- Due: Monday, January 30 (at the start of class)- You may handwrite or type this assignment- Points Possible: 10Outline Directions Using the first draft of Essay 1, create an outline. It might help you to first annotate your own essay. We practiced annotating an essay from chapter 14 in class on Wednesday. The outline can be formal (roman numerals, etc.) or informal. For an informal, you can choose to label each paragraph with a number or letter. Here’s an example.A. Introduction: My mother knows how I tough I have it, so she helps me out.B. Body Paragraph 1: She is there for me physically.a. She watches my kids when I’m in class or doing homeworkb. She listens to me and helps me plan my schedulec. She tells me I can be successful in school. d. She loans me her car or gives me rides when my car breaks.C. Body Paragraph 2: She is there for me financially.a. She buys my books for meD.Conclusion:When you create the outline based on what you originally wrote for Essay 1, you might realize that the organization is weak—maybe some paragraphs have ideas that don’t seem to match or support each other. For example, in the above outline, a student (we’llpretend she’s female) might make notes to herself so that she can make revisions on her next draft:Note— item B.c. is emotional help, not “physical help”so I need a new paragraph to talk about how she is there for me emotionally or I need to get rid of B.c. entirelyBoylesSpring 2012English 60Note—Body Paragraph 2 is too short—I need to add more evidence: She lets me live with her so I don’t have to pay a lot of rent. She buys gas for my car every other


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