BC ENGL B60 - Essay 1 Outline (2 pages)

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Bakersfield College
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Engl B60 - Basic Writing Skills *see Also Engl B53
Basic Writing Skills *see Also Engl B53 Documents

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Boyles Spring 2012 English 60 Name Date Essay 1 Outline Due Monday January 30 at the start of class You may handwrite or type this assignment Points Possible 10 Outline Directions Using the first draft of Essay 1 create an outline It might help you to first annotate your own essay We practiced annotating an essay from chapter 14 in class on Wednesday The outline can be formal roman numerals etc or informal For an informal you can choose to label each paragraph with a number or letter Here s an example A Introduction My mother knows how I tough I have it so she helps me out B Body Paragraph 1 She is there for me physically a She watches my kids when I m in class or doing homework b She listens to me and helps me plan my schedule c She tells me I can be successful in school d She loans me her car or gives me rides when my car breaks C Body Paragraph 2 She is there for me financially a She buys my books for me D Conclusion When you create the outline based on what you originally wrote for Essay 1 you might realize that the organization is weak maybe some paragraphs have ideas that don t seem to match or support each other For example in the above outline a student we ll pretend she s female might make notes to herself so that she can make revisions on her next draft Note item B c is emotional help not physical help so I need a new paragraph to talk about how she is there for me emotionally or I need to get rid of B c entirely Boyles Spring 2012 English 60 Note Body Paragraph 2 is too short I need to add more evidence She lets me live with her so I don t have to pay a lot of rent She buys gas for my car every other month



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